Saturday, 4 January 2020

DAY 2: TAKING ACTION - Week 2

Today I write 4 sentences of what I would feel in prison ground, this was week 2 of SLJ.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Akifa keep up with the good work make sure there is no mistakes. :)

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    1. Kia ora Fala,

      While I really do appreciate the effort you have made in getting back to me, I have to remind you that to be awarded points for commenting they need to match our guidelines of being a ‘positive, thoughtful & useful’.

      Here is a link that teaches you what a comment should be like https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/cybersmart/commenting

      I would love to give you the points so make sure you go back through your old comments and make new comments that meet these guidelines. I am really looking forward to reading them :)

      Blog you later!
      Georgia

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    2. Hi fala thank you for ur advice.

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  2. Kia ora Akifa! How are you doing? Olive here! It's still super windy in Auckland! Hope the weather's treating you better up in Northland!

    Thank you for a great blog post! I think you've talked about some really good points! It wouldn't be very nice to be in prison - away from all your friends and family! I don't think there would be very comfortable beds in prison. You'd need a lot of pillows I think! Keep up the great work and ka pai for all your effort! How do you think Nelson Mandela felt when he was in prison? I'd love to hear what you think!

    Keep blogging!

    Ngā mihi,
    Olive

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