Tuesday 17 September 2019

5 - 7 - 10 - Surprised Mouse

Photo courtesy of Valery Subachev, One Big Photo
The surprised mouse


Photo courtesy of Valery Subachev, One Big Photo courtesy of Valery 


Once there was a surprised and excited mouse, he was so excited to eat his breakfast from a little
boy called Marcus,
but when he went to Marcus’ house he did not see him. He was so worried and starving, but had no choice and did not eat any breakfast. Soon he saw Marcus but he did not feed him,
the mouse was in tears and sadness. His stomach grumbled with hunger.
Three hours later he was still waiting for food but nobody came, so he went back home
to his mouse house crying.

Soon Marcus saw the mouse and he laid a bag of food in a tray. The mouse was surprised

he was jumping up with happiness and laughter, soon he ate half of it . He was so grateful and soon
hugged Marcus. He now knows that when marcus is gone it is because he is getting food.

Today in class we did 5 - 7 - 10 writing, in the 5 - 7 - 10 writing our story we did today is surprised mouse.

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